Analysis of An Empty Nest

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



I find an old deserted nest,
Half-hidden in the underbrush:
A withered leaf, in phantom jest,
Has nestled in it like a thrush
With weary, palpitating breast.

I muse as one in sad surprise
Who seeks his childhood's home once more,
And finds it in a strange disguise
Of vacant rooms and naked floor,
With sudden tear-drops in his eyes.

An empty nest! It used to bear
A happy burden, when the breeze
Of summer rocked it, and a pair
Of merry tattlers told the trees
What treasures they had hidden there.

But Fancy, flitting through the gleams
Of youth's sunshiny atmosphere,
Has fallen in the past, and seems,
Like this poor leaflet nestled here,--
A phantom guest of empty dreams.


Scheme ABABA CDCDC EFEFE GXGXG
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110101 1100010 01010101 11001101 11010001 11110101 1111111 01100101 11010101 11011011 11011111 01010101 11011001 1101101 11011101 11010101 111010 11000101 11110101 01011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 666
Words 124
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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