Analysis of A Leave-Taking

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



She will not smile;
She will not stir;
I marvel while
I look on her.
The lips are chilly
And will not speak;
The ghost of a lily
In either cheek.

Her hair--ah me!
Her hair--her hair!
How helplessly
My hands go there!
But my caresses
Meet not hers,
O golden tresses
That thread my tears!

I kiss the eyes
On either lid,
Where her love lies
Forever hid.
I cease my weeping
And smile and say:
I will be sleeping
Thus, some day!


Scheme ABABCDCD CECEFXFX GHGHIJIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1111 1101 1110 01110 0111 011010 0101 0111 0101 1100 1111 11010 110 11010 1111 1101 1101 1011 0101 11110 0101 11110 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 408
Words 86
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 16, 2023

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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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