Analysis of The Western



THOR draws a chord invisible
    Across the shaking sky:
I hear the tearing of the shell,
    The bullets sing and cry,
As, charging through the flames of hell,
    The batteries go by.

The gunners laugh about the task,
    That man to man has given:
Like Titans, now the guns unmask,
    And fire the veils of heaven.
Above the cloud what lights are gleaming?
    God's batteries are those,
Or souls of soldiers, homeward streaming
    To banquet with their foes?
The floods of battle ebb and flow,
The soldiers to Valhalla go!

They say that, when the day awoke,
    And the dying night was wan,
Harry of England rode the smoke,
    And led the English van:
And bowmen in the battle-glare
    Rose from the ghostly dew:
The clothyard sang upon the air,
    And the grey goose-feather flew!
Harry of England is awake,
His archers mind not trench or stake !

And men have seen the Emperor,
    The Eagle of the South:
God grant the bonds be loosed by Thor
    That bind that marble mouth!
The silver roads of conquest lie
    Fast frozen in his brow:
Would those imperious lips were free
    To give their orders now!
The floods of battle ebb and flow,
The soldiers to Valhalla go!

Beyond the thunder of the guns,
    Beyond the flaming line,
Far from this sky of echoing bronze,
    The English valleys shine;
The gardens, moated in the wolds,
    By wind and water kissed;
And dainty girls, that England folds
    In sunshine and in mist.
The floods of battle ebb and flow,
The soldiers to Valhalla go!

The fighting men go charging past,
    With the battle in their eyes,
The fighting men go reeling past,
    Like gods in poor disguise:
And stumbling men, whom none will see,
    No wife or mother more,
Winged with the wings of Victory,
    And helmeted by Thor!

Above the cloud what lights are gleaming?
    God's batteries are those,
Or souls of soldiers, homeward streaming
    To banquet with their foes?


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010100 010101 11010101 010101 11010111 010011 01010101 1111110 11010101 01001110 010111110 110011 111101010 110111 01110101 0101101 11110101 0010111 10110101 010101 01000101 110101 0110101 0011101 10110101 1111111 01110100 010101 11011111 111101 01011101 110011 110100101 111101 01110101 0101101 01010101 010101 111111001 010101 0101001 110101 01011101 01001 01110101 0101101 01011101 1010011 01011101 110101 010011111 111101 11011100 010011 010111110 110011 111101010 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,862
Words 329
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 10, 10, 10, 8, 4
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:39 min read
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Herbert Asquith

The Hon. Herbert Asquith was an English poet, novelist and lawyer. more…

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