Analysis of Substance Versus Shadow

Ambrose Bierce 1842 (Meigs County) – 1914 (Chihuahua)



So, gentle critics, you would have me tilt,
Not at the guilty, only just at Guilt!
Spare the offender and condemn Offense,
And make life miserable to Pretense!
'Whip Vice and Folly-that is satire's use
But be not personal, for _that's_ abuse;
Nor e'er forget what, 'like a razor keen,
Wounds with a touch that's neither felt nor seen.''
Well, friends, I venture, destitute of awe,
To think that razor but an old, old saw,
A trifle rusty; and a wound, I'm sure,
That's felt not, seen not, one can well endure.
Go to! go to!-you're as unfitted quite
To give advice to writers as to write.
I find in Folly and in Vice a lack
Of head to hit, and for the lash no back;
Whilst Pixley has a pow that's easy struck,
And though good Deacon Fitch (a Fitch for luck!)
Has none, yet, lest he go entirely free,
God gave to him a corn, a heel to me.
He, also, sets his face (so like a flint
The wonder grows that Pickering doesn't skin't)
With cold austerity, against these wars
On scamps-'tis Scampery that _he_ abhors!
Behold advance in dignity and state
Grave, smug, serene, indubitably great
Stanford, philanthropist! One hand bestows
In alms what t'other one as justice owes.
Rascality attends him like a shade,
But closes, woundless, o'er my baffled blade,
Its limbs unsevered, spirit undismayed.
Faith! I'm for something can be made to feel,
If, like Pelides, only in the heel.
The fellow's self invites assault; his crimes
Will each bear killing twenty thousand times!
Anon Creed Haymond-but the list is long
Of names to point the moral of my song.
Rogues, fools, impostors, sycophants, they rise,
They foul the earth and horrify the skies
With Mr. Huntington (sole honest man
In all the reek of that rapscallion clan)
Denouncing Theft as hard as e'er he can!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101011111 1101010111 1001000101 0111000101 110101111 1111001101 11001110101 1101110111 111101011 1111011111 0101000111 1111111101 11111111 1101110111 1101000101 1111010111 1101011101 0111010111 11111101001 1111010111 1101111101 010111001011 111000111 11111101 0101010001 110111 1001001101 01111011101 1011101 1101101101 111101 1111011111 11110001 0101010111 1111010101 111010111 1111010111 11010111 110101001 1101001101 01011111 01011111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,720
Words 318
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 42
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,344
Words per stanza (avg) 313
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:40 min read
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Ambrose Bierce

Ambrose Gwinnett Bierce was an American editorialist, journalist, short story writer, fabulist, and satirist. more…

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