Analysis of Poem 3
I started to write a poem,
and then I stopped.
I stopped,
because the use of ART
to express emotion
diminishes the truth
of how I feel.
It’s a falsehood -
a facade…
an unconvincing,
anodyne version
of what I actually want to reveal
So, instead,
here is the most truthful thing I have ever said:
“It broke my heart when I left.
I hoped that you would run away with me”,
thoughts of sanity/madness bereft -
just a chance to die with me
in sympathy…
but you stayed in your safety,
you stayed in your well,
you became the
‘Dorian Grey’
of the world you were placed into -
the pressure of knowledge,
and the dismissal there unto,
and so I retreated into a safety -
a shell.
I WILL see you again,
you are guaranteed.
Please put
just a touch
of salt
in my
coffee.
It cuts through the bitterness.
It reminds me of you.
Scheme | XA AXBXC XXXBC DD E FEFFFG XXH XH FG XX XXXXF X H |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011010 0111 11 010111 101010 010001 1111 101 001 1010 110 1111001101 101 110110111101 1111111 1111110111 111001001 1011111 0100 1110110 11011 1010 1001 10110101 010110 00010110 01101001010 01 111101 1101 11 101 11 01 10 1110100 101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 875 |
Words | 205 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 5, 5, 2, 1, 6, 3, 2, 2, 2, 5, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 48 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 12 |
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