Analysis of Even When It Hurts



Even When It Hurts
By Nancy Rodriquez

I love you even when it hurts, through all the lies and façade, even at your worst, in my mind, I still see your  face,
I long to be in your arms where I am supposed to be, in a perfect world which should be the case, you have been the biggest part of me,  in my feelings, I hesitate ,
You are hiding behind a mask, and when it slips, I can see the real you, without having to ask, you should tell your truth,
We are two souls connected in mystic bliss, I have longed to again know your kiss,
You hurt me when the trust is broken in a symphony of tears, slandering what was meant to be for years,
Tying my heart strings all in knots, while playing games at naught,
Questions in my head should not be , while hoping another lover has not been in your bed, I close my eyes in shame, praying to not have shattered dreams.


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Poetic Form
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Characters 859
Words 178
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 7
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 73
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 329
Words per stanza (avg) 87

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Lovers angst in the flames

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Written on May 02, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on May 02, 2024

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