Analysis of Bitter



Bitter
Touch down! He scores
Won the battle again
She can't have nothing to herself.
Not her body and not her family.
Bitter.
The taste, the touch and the feel.
Tears. Dirty rags and broken memories.
They embrace rejoice and break bread with the enemy.
Maybe she should get over it.
Be used to betrayal by now
But the bitterness is warm in her belly.
And the taste of ash on her tongue
Feels flaming hot to the touch,
Careful now and it'll burn ya.
Can't seem to get over
He got up under many times
No asking please just take and take.
Now he's pulled one over
Pulled the rug from under her feet
Laughter and rejoicing, let's eat!
While she sits acast off and starves.
But nah it's cool,
Cold as ice
And a heart made of stone
She'll petrify you if you look too long
Like Medusa a slayer of all she ever knew
By or not by choice, depending on the legend
Alone, isolated, she longs to be vindicated. Yea...she's....
Bitter.


Scheme AbcdeAfgehiejklamnaoobpqrstubA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 10 1111 101001 11110101 1010010100 10 0101001 1101010100 1010101110100 10111101 11101011 10100110010 00111101 1101101 10101011 111110 11110101 11011101 111110 10111001 10001011 1111101 1111 111 001111 110111111 1010010111101 111110101010 01100111110001 10
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 921
Words 191
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 709
Words per stanza (avg) 175

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Written on April 07, 2024

Submitted by missy_sissy on April 07, 2024

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