Analysis of Voices
Shh… do you hear them…
No, you pretended you couldn’t hear more than the sounds of the night
I pleaded for you to listen, the voices calling to me
Sounding like a lullaby being whispered against the wallpapered halls
Nothing but a falsely sympathetic smile
Why didn’t you care enough for me
Simply stating it were a mere lack of sleep, all in my head
You know, I’m not crazy
Shh… do you hear them…
No, you couldn’t hear them because you left me here where the walls talk
Inky shadows walking through the halls
The dark cold energy trailing along their restrictive chains
Steel links that bound to them from life's failures
Why have you gone so far from me
The void that’s been created now set deep within my wounded heart
I heard you singing your love the night it started, the night you left
Shh… do you hear them…
No, you no longer hear anything while being so far down
Heavy voices drowning even my deepest thoughts
They haunt my dreams, or maybe my wake
Night and day intermingling into a blur now
Why didn’t you take me with you then
Only telling me life was meant to be one long journey but not for us both
Wishing now that the darkness would consume me, to be with you
Scheme | A xbcx bx b A xcxx bx x A xxxx xx x |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 110101111101101 110111100101011 1010101010010101 1010100101 11110111 101010011111011 111110 11111 111110111111011 10110101 011100100110101 1111111110 11111111 0111010111011101 1111011011100111 11111 11110110110111 101010101101 111111011 101010001011 11111111 1010111111111011111 101101010111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,226 |
Words | 236 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 2, 1, 1, 4, 2, 1, 1, 4, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 78 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
It's a loss of self. When we end up in a place where we lose who we are from the manipulation of others.
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