Analysis of starry tale citizen



I`m of citizen tale
From not a big sleeping star,
On troglodytes in helme
I never give a... far.
If death realy inevitable,
Сompletely no need to rush her, -
Сome on, don't move  this bunch
Then there will be no need to turn
Your noses copletly away,
Shyly hiding you gaze, -
Without sharing pain
No one can reach the gates,
Most likely the illusory,
But peacefully leave it this place
The lot  only eternal rebels
What is not turned to waste
Every inch of  the length
Multiplied many by light.
Even if haven't confidence,
And there is no sacred site.

Я гражданин сказки
Сонной некрупной звезды,
На троглодитов в касках
Мне отродясь до звезды.
Если смерть неминуча,
Не след её торопить,-
Не ворошите кучу,
Тогда и носы воротить
Незачем будет боле,
Стыдливо скрывая взгляд,-
Не разделяя боли
Никому не достигнуть врат,
Скорее всего иллюзорных,
Но в мире покинуть мир
Удел только тех непокорных,
Что не превращают в сортир
Каждую пядь протяжённости
Помноженной кратно на свет.
Даже если определённости
И сакрального смысла нет.


Scheme XAXAXXXXXXXXXXXXXBXB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 111001 1101101 1101 110101 11101000 111110 111111 11111111 110101 101011 01101 111101 11000100 11001111 011001010 111111 1001101 101011 10110100 0111101 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,445
Words 197
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 20, 20
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 213
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

This poem is a translation I made of my Russian original.

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Written on February 22, 2024

Submitted by Ulenspiegel on March 06, 2024

Modified by Ulenspiegel on March 06, 2024

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