Analysis of Did you?

Gea gray 2005 (texas)



Did you know your love was drowning when you pulled me in so deep?
Did you realize I was dying, or did you think I was asleep?
Did you know my heart was breaking, did you even look for a beat?
When you saw tears fall down my cheeks did you think it was rain?
Or did you know all along your “love” was causing me pain?
You can stand and play the victim, never plead guilty for this crime.
It wouldn’t matter anyways the heart put in a prison was mine  


Scheme AABCCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111101111011 1110111011111101 1111111011101101 11111111111111 11111011111011 1110101010110111 111010011001011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 458
Words 98
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 346
Words per stanza (avg) 92

About this poem

this is a poem about being unsure of a past lover/partner and being skeptical of their intentions. and whether or not it was love or love bombing throughout your relationship. this poem is written in the perspective of someone who is angry but doesn't know if they should be angry or not yet regardless, they still feel hurt by the way things ended.

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Written on February 18, 2024

Submitted by geagray.20243568 on February 18, 2024

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Gea gray

I'm a sixteen-year-old who finds comfort in words. I write because it's one of the few freedoms we get to have. I hope maybe other people will find peace in my words too. more…

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