Analysis of The Black Bordered Letter

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



An’ SO ’e’s dead in London,
An’ answered to the call,
An’ trotted through the Long Street,
With ’earse an’ plumes an’ all?
We was village boys an’ brothers—
We was warm as we could be,
In the milk-walk an’ the fried fish,
Up in London, ’im an’ me.
We was warm,
We was warm,
As we ’ad always been;
We never ’ad a dry word
Till she come between.

I lived round Windsor Terrace,
An’ ’im across the wye,
An’ when I sailed a emigrant
We never said good-bye!
He wos better than a brother—
Wot you Bushmen call a mate.
(Did he reach the rylwye stytion,
As they told me, just too late!)

We was warm,
We was warm,
As pals was ever seen;
We never ’ad a dry word
Till she come between.

I meant to go back ’ome again,
I meant to write to-night;
I meant to write by every mail,
But I thought ’e oughter write.
An’ now ’e’s left North London—
For a better place, perhaps—
She’s flauntin’ in ’er widder weeds,
With eyes on other chaps.

We was warm,
We was warm,
As we ’ad always been;
We never ’ad a dry word
Till she come between.

Oh! tongues is bad in wimmin,
When wimmin’s tongues is bad!
For they’ll part men an’ brothers
World oceans wide, my lad!
There was seven years between us,
An’ fifteen thousand mile,
An’ now there’s death an’ sorrer
For ever an’ awhile.

We was warm,
We was warm,
As two was ever seen;
We never ’ad a dry word
Till she come between.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 110101 1101011 111111 11101110 1111111 00111011 1010111 111 111 11111 1101011 11101 1111010 110101 11110100 110111 11101010 1110101 111011 1111111 111 111 111101 1101011 11101 11111101 111111 111111001 111111 1111110 1010101 1100101 111101 111 111 11111 1101011 11101 111101 11111 1111110 110111 11101011 101101 111111 110101 111 111 111101 1101011 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,392
Words 270
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 13, 8, 5, 8, 5, 8, 5
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:21 min read
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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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