Analysis of Husk

Cas Wilson 1999 (United States)



I saw the brown withered husk
of you
just lying in the sunshine,
the dust motes perching
on the crown of your skull.
I stared and thought,
so this is what it's come to,
what I have took forward to.
A withered, ghastly thing,
a waif of the world
lost in her own shadow.
I stroked the leathery skin
and up close,
you weren't so bad,
just tragic.
I know you tried.
You don't need to tell me.
You were full of everyone else's life
but empty in that space
where your own should have been.
I lived inside the sunbeams
streaming through your window,
and all the time,
I wish you did too.


Scheme ABCADEBBFGHIJKLMNOPIJHQB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 11 110001 0111 101111 1101 1111111 1111101 010101 01101 10011 1101001 011 11011 110 1111 111111 101110101 110011 111111 110101 101110 0101 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 582
Words 130
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 446
Words per stanza (avg) 114
Font size:
 

Written on January 10, 2024

Submitted by LadyPhantasmagoria on January 10, 2024

Modified by LadyPhantasmagoria on January 10, 2024

40 sec read
1

Cas Wilson

Cas Wilson is a twenty-something history and book nerd living in Pennsylvania with their partner. They have been devouring books their entire life with no plans to stop anytime soon. more…

All Cas Wilson poems | Cas Wilson Books

2 fans

Discuss this Cas Wilson poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Husk" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 21 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/178368/husk>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    10
    days
    21
    hours
    16
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Which poet is associated with the poem "I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings"?
    A Langston Hughes
    B Ralph Waldo Emerson
    C Emily Dickinson
    D Maya Angelou