Analysis of In The Same Vein ...



Prisoner Of Language

Will time live eternal
or just its retelling
A prisoner of language
whose paradox mined

Dimension in contrast
ill-fated contrition
To look but not touch
—and hope they align

(Rosemont College: December, 2023)

Through A Vacuum

Biologically tethered
time is the demon
Your flesh and your blood
by nature defined

Each tic of the clock
your heart beats in cadence
Dogmatic in method
caught up in the brine

What if your consciousness
took a leap forward
Abandoning reference
erasing the lines

Polarity exits
its jail through a vacuum
Releasing reversing
—becoming sublime

(Rosemont College: December, 2023)

Dig up the foundation
requestion each premise
Wade through the bathwater
the baby must go

A leap when it’s quantum
still subject and object
Fly out of the portal
—rejecting what’s known

(Rosemont College: December, 2023)


Scheme a bcad xexf G h iejd xkjf xikx xhcx G exgx xxbx G
Poetic Form
Metre 100110 111010 111010 0100110 1101 010010 110010 11111 01101 110010 1010 0010010 11010 11011 11001 11101 111010 010010 11001 111100 10110 0100100 01001 010010 111010 010010 01001 110010 110010 1110 1101 01011 011110 101010 111010 01001 110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 883
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 1, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Kurt Philip Behm

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