Analysis of Joy Abstained



Blame …   
deep and abiding
Praise …
a fleeting call
Infliction kills
affection shills
Their contrast
casts a pall

One …
a timeless burden
The other …
flits away
Tomorrow’s pain
all joy abstained
Entrapped
—where memories stay

(The New Room: December, 2023)


Scheme XXAXXAXX BBCDXXXD C
Poetic Form
Metre 1 10010 1 0101 0101 0101 110 101 1 01010 010 101 011 1101 01 11001 011010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 274
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on December 15, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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