Analysis of This I vow.



In the shadows, I stand, not the first to love you,
But the last, I aspire to be, to cherish and hold true.
I may not have been the first to make your heart sing,
But I long to be the only one to make it forever ring.

To be better this time and respect you every single day,
To be your lover and your friend, come what may.
I'll listen, I'll share, and I'll always be kind,
For you are the only one who occupies my mind.

I love you, I'll always love you, this I vow,
You are the only one I'll ever love, then and now.
In your laughter, in your tears, I'll always be near,
To love you deeply, to hold you close, my love.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 00111101111 10110111110011 111110111111 1111101011110101 1110110011100101 11110011111 1101101111 111010111011 1111111111 1101011101101 01100111111 11110111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 621
Words 142
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

A deep and sincere commitment to love and cherish someone, despite not being the first in their life. It expresses a promise to provide unconditional love, respect, and companionship, aiming to be the ultimate and everlasting source of love and support.

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Written on December 08, 2023

Submitted by norjielmaebrandino on December 07, 2023

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