Analysis of Over...Qualified!?



Turning back the clock.
For those young and old.
In a forever nonstopping mode.
Living for good times.
To have everlasting fun for them done.
Ignoring the voice of reason say,
'Isn't it time to find,
Something to do that occupies your mind.
Like a job to have?
And perhaps in your mind acknowledge,
Bills to pay do not get that way.
To rely on someone else them to be paid.
Nor food to eat to keep you fed.
While you lay in bed.
Using the electricity and gas to heat,
The roof you live under.
Then claim what's in the refrigerator,
Is not your preference nor does it please.
And then complain,
Money not earned but given to you...
Is not enough to meet,
Your entertainment needs.
Leaving the one to wonder why,
Someone like you brags about having...
A Masters Degree in economics!'

Voice of reason?

'Hush up, I'm not done.
And you, your friends sit around all day,
Convincing yourselves how young you appear.
When all of you do nothing else,
But do a sleepwalking done through your 30's.
Now all of you are approaching 41.
To be able to roll up your sleeves.
And apply to elbows,
With an overdue use of much needed...
Elbow grease!'

Voice of reason?
This has been discussed between us before.
But every door we've knocked on.
We were told of being over qualified.

'Over what?
Qualified?!
Over qualified to do what?'

Dance to the rhythm.
Hip hop and rap to the beat.
Harmonized to sing in tune.
With steps we choreographed,
And synchronized are our feet.

'But...
Didn't you earn a Masters Degree,
In Economics?'

Yeah, we did.
And the places we went to prove what we do.
They say we're over qualified.
Since clowns they've hired,
Who lied and deceived.
About degrees they didn't have.
Are in need to be replaced.
Because they dressed to give image.
Yet...
Nothing more did they do,
But prove a lack of competence.
Synchronized together.
And no common sense,
Our other employees noticed...
Had been skillfully choreographed.

'So...
What places did you go to show,
Your degrees in economics?'

Well...
After we were shown,
What they expected us to do.
To work magic and miracles to heal,
Today's devastating economy?
We decided,
Skills like that we no longer had.
So...
We depend on empathy and understanding.
With the hope the economy,
Doesn't get worse than it has.

Voice of reason?
What advice to us do you have?

Voice of reason?

Voice of reason?
Are you still there?


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 10101 11101 0001011 10111 110101111 010011101 101111 101111011 10111 001011010 11111111 1011111111 11111111 11101 10001000111 011110 111000100 1111001111 0101 101111011 110111 10101 10011101 11110110 010010010 1110 11111 011110111 0100111101 11111101 110101111 11111010 111011111 00111 1110111110 11 1110 1110101101 11001111 1011101010 101 10 1010111 11010 1101101 101101 111100 0101101 1 101101001 0010 111 00101111111 1111010 11110 11001 01011101 101111 01111110 1 101111 11011100 10010 01101 101001010 11100100 1 11011111 1010010 1 10101 11010111 1110010011 011000100 110 11111101 1 10111000010 10100100 1011111 1110 10111111 1110 1110 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,377
Words 520
Sentences 64
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 25, 1, 10, 4, 3, 5, 3, 15, 3, 11, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 85
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on December 05, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 05, 2023

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