Analysis of The Unsaid Story



In the realm of hidden hearts, a tale unfolds,
A silent longing, a story seldom told.
He walks amidst a web of love's complex design,
Caught in the threads of the past, where hearts entwine.

She, from his history, lingers in the shadow's grace,
A lingering ember of a past love's face.
Her eyes, like daggers, cast a bitter brew,
For she knows my feelings, and her disdain is true.

He, a bridge between two shores,
Unaware of the emotions my heart explores.
Does he sense the truth but choose not to reveal,
To preserve a bond, a friendship, we both conceal?

In this delicate dance of secrets and lies,
Where emotions run deep, hidden behind our eyes,
I tread with care, for I fear the unknown,
In a story where the seeds of affection are sown.

Yet, through it all, my heart beats its own song,
A melody of hope, though the path is long.
In this intricate tale of friendship's sweet art,
I cherish the moments with a silent longing at heart.


Scheme XXAA BBCC DDEE FFGG HHII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Metre 00111010101 01010010101 110101111001 10011011101 111100100011 01001010111 0111010101 111110000111 1010111 01100101101 11101111101 101010101101 01100111001 1010111001101 1111111001 0010101101011 1111111111 01001110111 0110011111 11001010101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 945
Words 197
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

I wrote this poem to get my feelings out.

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Written on September 27, 2023

Submitted by ananyap.23616 on September 27, 2023

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