Analysis of I Sometimes Go Astray



Sometimes my thoughts will go astray.
It happens every single day,
Especially when I am tired.

The Devil seems to know just when
I start to daydream once again
And tempts me when they have expired.

I need the Shepherd guiding me
When Satan comes so he can see
If sin is now desired.

The Shepherd guards my mind and heart.
How could I ever live apart
When more faith is required?


Scheme AAB CCX DDB EEB
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 110100101 01011110 01011111 1111101 01111101 11010101 11011111 1111010 01011101 11110101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 384
Words 84
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Needing the Good Shepherd

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Written on September 20, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on September 20, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on September 20, 2023

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