Analysis of A Whipper-In

Ambrose Bierce 1842 (Meigs County) – 1914 (Chihuahua)



Dudley, great placeman, man of mark and note,
Worthy of honor from a feeble pen
Blunted in service of all true, good men,
You serve the Lord-in courses, _table d'hote:
Au, naturel,_ as well as _a la Nick
'Eat and be thankful, though it make you sick.'

O, truly pious caterer, forbear
To push the Saviour and Him crucified
_(Brochette_ you'd call it) into their inside
Who're all unused to such ambrosial fare.
The stomach of the soul makes quick revulsion
Of aught that it has taken on compulsion.

I search the Scriptures, but I do not find
That e'er the Spirit beats with angry wings
For entrance to the heart, but sits and sings
To charm away the scruples of the mind.
It says: 'Receive me, please; I'll not compel'
Though if you don't you will go straight to Hell!

Well, that's compulsion, you will say. 'T is true:
We cower timidly beneath the rod
Lifted in menace by an angry God,
But won't endure it from an ape like you.
Detested simian with thumb prehensile,
Switch _me_ and I would brain you with my pencil!

Face you the Throne, nor dare to turn your back
On its transplendency to flog some wight
Who gropes and stumbles in the infernal night
Your ugly shadow lays along his track.
O, Thou who from the Temple scourged the sin,
Behold what rascals try to scourge it in!


Scheme ABBACC DEEDFF GHHGII DJJXIX KLLKMM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101111101 1011010101 1001011111 1101010111 11111111 1011011111 110101001 11010110 1111101101 10101110101 01010111010 11111101010 1101011111 11001011101 1101011101 1101010101 1101111101 1111111111 11010111111 1101000101 1001011101 1101111111 010100111 11011111110 1101111111 1111111 11010000101 110110111 1111010101 0111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,257
Words 240
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 198
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:14 min read
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Ambrose Bierce

Ambrose Gwinnett Bierce was an American editorialist, journalist, short story writer, fabulist, and satirist. more…

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