Analysis of My Mother’s House

Linda Williams 1950 (Hollywood)



My mothers house, I never left
I have to now, I am bereft.
Betrayal runs deep
I feel it in my sleep.

With my heart pounding,
I find it astounding—
You should’ve given me away
Instead of letting me stay.

I live in a dream, an allusion
And now that is my conclusion.
My eyes are quite clear—
I see you in a mirror.

Regret is too high of a price.
Move on is good advice.
Now I think I can take a breath.
Treating you like death.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11011101 11111101 01011 111011 11110 111010 1110101 0111011 110011010 01111010 11111 1110010 01111101 111101 11111101 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 435
Words 100
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

My mother keeps accepting me and then rejecting me. Because of her religious beliefs.

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Written on August 21, 2023

Submitted by Toomerlin on August 21, 2023

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