Analysis of Two Mom



My first plane ride
I was scared and excited
She came to pick me up from the airport
Her car was big and burgundy  
I rode in the front seat
I never got to do that
We listened to Johnny Mathis on the radio
We talked about how much my mom loved Johnny and Chances Are
We got to her townhouse
She opened the door and in walked a fluffy gray kitty
Just like that
He walked in as if he had been waiting for me
I named him Smoky
He would be my cat
I had always wanted a cat
That made me feel so very important
She showed me how to clean kitchen  counters
And how I should always save the best for last
She told me how she owned land on the Vegas strip
But sold it because they built in the other direction
When I wasn’t begging her to go swimming
My favorite thing was her doll collection
No ordinary one mind you
These dolls were from all over the world
From her travels working on cruise ships
Most dressed in the traditional garb of their homeland
They were all so exotic to me
I sat in front of the case that held them
And imagined the places from whence they came
I found a picture of Two Mom and Daddy Doug the other day
They were on the deck of a ship
Looking young and in love
I wish she were here to tell me all about it
We would watch tv at night
Laughing at her kitty Tiger who loved the top of the TV set
His tail would drag back and forth in front of the screen
Like a windshield wiper
Once she came to me in a dream
We were in her living room
Just as it was
She was showing me her necklaces
Then she made me lunch


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1110010 111111101 01110100 110011 1101111 110110101010 110111111100101 11101 11001001010110 111 110111111011 11110 11111 1111001 1111110010 1111111010 0111110111 111111110101 11101110010010 1111001110 11001101010 1100111 110111001 101010111 110001001111 101101011 1101101111 00100101111 1101011101010101 10101101 101001 111011111011 1111111 10101010110110111 111110101101 10110 11111001 1000101 1111 111010100 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,541
Words 335
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 42
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,202
Words per stanza (avg) 318

About this poem

Honoring the matriarch of my family. My great grandmother. A beautiful human being.

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Written on May 01, 2023

Submitted by annl.07960 on August 08, 2023

1:40 min read
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Ann Lee-Gardea

Mother and grandmother. Fresh out of a very long bad marriage. Rebuilding my life and getting back to what I love…..writing. more…

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