Analysis of The Eternal War of Despair
Heart of gold, hair like wool
lost eclipses in a place that you stole
burns the night
forget my life
chaos has engulfed me
Insanity!
Insanity!
Insanity!
life has draped me
in cloths of color
I cannot surrender
I cannot remember
this life I lead
I know I plead
Help me, help me, help me
Gold skin that glimmered, butterflies
I can't stand to face it. I coincide.
Turn my back to the moon
It is time to leave soon.
I sit beside myself, looking out
Uncertainty beholds me
I walk alongside myself.
Drawn with Regret
Regrets that have made me into a fool
With a heart of gold that you stole
I decided to no longer do what I'm told
I walk alone. Gold skin,
Butterflies
Withered away inside.
Fallen with the embers of regret
I walk alone - dignified
I cannot say that I've given a lie
I just coincide
Separate from my own mind
Delusion is an art
I set off, burns the night
I won't give up without a fight
I only walked towards the light
Glows my skin, now a color white
Find me on the otherside.
The waves are full of turmoil
I can't catch my breath
Departed before the tidal waves headed in
I know no matter what I don't win
My soul over yours
Split inside of my mind
I have lost so much time
Always in the back of my mind
Dignified
moving closer to the stench
of burning carcasses
I can't take much more of this.
cowardice actions set out by the masses
stuck in the twilight's gleaming static
lost in a sea of flickering blue crustaceans
No more, no more, no more
designed to crash a ship in this sea of failure
grab the raft that is airless
look to the sky that shines red
it is always night.
The sole purpose of survival
Is to face the fact that you will die
Whether or not you are memorialized
You have lived a life of defeat.
The war that doesn't end
Always ends with you
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Metre | 111111 1010001111 101 0111 101011 0100 0100 0100 1111 01110 110010 110010 1111 1111 111111 111110 111111101 111101 111111 11011101 010011 110111 1101 0111110101 10111111 11011101111 110111 10 100101 101010101 110110 1101111001 1101 101111 010111 111101 11110101 11010101 11110101 11101 011111 11111 010010101100 111101111 11101 101111 111111 1001111 10 1010101 110100 1111111 10010111010 10011010 100111001010 111111 011101011110 1011110 1101111 1111 01101010 111011111 1011110100 11101101 011101 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,806 |
Words | 381 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 7, 4, 4, 7, 5, 5, 9, 3, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 66 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 107 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Written on July 31, 2023
Submitted on July 31, 2023
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