Analysis of To the one who saved my life
To the one who saved my life
I fell for you the first time we met in that room in that house I’ll never forget.
You had flowing hair and a smile from ear to ear.
I thought wow never seen anything like her.
I was wild and care free bit of a lad.
loud and funny desperately hoping you’d see.
We were friends for a while but never did we separate.
i even dated your mate for a while thinking I’ll find a way to get her just you wait.
I fell in with the wrong crowd and went off the rails I was in danger of losing my life or going right jail.
Then there was that one day I was on my own my 18th birthday wishing I wasn’t alone and my life wasn’t that way.
I know you remember that day you know I’ll never forget .
your face when I opened the door your excuse for being there that pretty brown dress.
We had laugh and had few drinks.
then we both new a romance had begun.
I can’t believe I’ve met you and you gave me that first glance .
you saved life and I can never thank you but for the rest of my life I’ll try ,
to make you as happy as you’ve made me and one day make you my wife
I can’t imagine life without you thank you for saving me giving me a family too
I love like I’ve loved no other and always will.
the bad times you e helped me though been loyal right and true.
never will I ever be able to repay you for what you do.
but I promise till the day I die I be loyal strong and true ,Ill try to be the person you deserve I love you xxxxx
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| Metre | 1011111 11110111101101111001 111010011111 1111011010 1110111101 101010001011 1011011101110 1101011101101101110111 110101101101110101101111011 111111111111111101101011111 111010111111001 11111001101110111011 1110111 1111001101 11011110111111 1110111011110111111 11111011110111111 11010101111110110101001 11111110011 01111111110101 10111011010111111 111010111111010111110101011111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
| Characters | 1,474 |
| Words | 326 |
| Sentences | 18 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 22 |
| Lines Amount | 22 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 50 |
| Words per line (avg) | 14 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,105 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 309 |
About this poem
It’s a story of how a young tear away met the love of his life and how she saved his life it’s true heartfelt I hope she likes it I want to see what you think
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