Analysis of The fight within



Everything seems so powerless, I feel supressed,

Sitting on my kneels with screaming voices inside my head,

Tired of battling the demons inside and out,

Wounded by the pain, full of self-doubt;

Choking on my own breath, I close my eyes,

I see impenetrable darkness and loneliness, 

Completely drained out and suffocated,

Emotionless and cold with self-hatred,

But all of a sudden, I see a ray of light,

With newly filled hope, I stood up with all my might;

All the scattered voices channelled into one,

Peaceful than ever, and with new motivation;

I opened my eyes and felt pleasure unexperienced,

I was awestruck with the beauty around me,

Admiring the newly found happiness, I realise,

Faith was the answer to my endless cries.


Scheme A A A A B X A A A A C C A X B B
Poetic Form
Metre 1011100111 10111110100111 1011000100101 101011111 1011111111 1101000100100 010110100 1011110 111010110111 110111111111 1010101011 10110011010 1101101101 1111010011 010010110011 1101011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 749
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

This is for everyone who are burdened by the struggles of the world but have found the peace within.

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Written on April 08, 2023

Submitted by nikunjbahety27 on May 10, 2023

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