Analysis of Exhaustion



I am so tired, I could fall asleep right now
I slept for 10 hours so I don't know how
I am so drained, I don't know how much more I can take
If things do not change I will break
Teachers give even more homework, now another hour
I hope all these hours will make my parents proud
But if I fail, I know they will scowl
So I can not make a mistake
I am so tired
All these hours, and I still get a B, how?
A simple mistake, all because I was tired, wow.
I can’t focus anymore, all of the headaches
Now I am going to FAU high, they have raised the stakes
So much work I might become a night owl
I am so tired


Scheme aabbcdebFaaggeF
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110111 1111011111 1111111111111 11111111 1011011101010 111110111101 111111111 11111001 11110 11100111011 0100110111101 1110011101 1111011111101 1111101011 11110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 616
Words 141
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 458
Words per stanza (avg) 131

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Inspired By My Insomnia

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Written on May 07, 2023

Submitted by MShepley on May 08, 2023

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