Analysis of New Prayer Directives



have crossed a line

Hard to trace

How I got there.

Years of asking

Standing in the gap

But too much of that yapping jaw.

As if merit might be measured

That way, but NO.

One quiet early Sunday morning

Alone in a study room

On Laurier Campus.

Reading Colossians Letter.

Then trying to pray.

It was as if Holy Spirit

“Doug please stop talking

I cannot squeeze a Word in.

Conversation is the ticket.

I will not overwhelm.

I want to partner in this.

Whisper to you.

You know this is true.

Perhaps communing, meditating.

Developing awareness that

We are together.

Peace and assurance

Come that way.

And very simply so. OK?”


Scheme X X X A X X X X A X X B C D A X D X X E E A X B X C C
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111 1111 1110 10001 1111111 11101110 1111 11010110 0100101 1110 10110 11011 11111010 11110 1101010 0101010 11101 1111001 1011 11111 01010100 01000101 11010 10010 111 01010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 725
Words 180
Sentences 19
Stanzas 27
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on May 07, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 07, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 07, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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