Conscripted Killer-child



Come here little one

From under that acacia

Sure I know that it’s hot

Leave the rifle there.

Leave it.

Appears to be jammed anyway.



How didya get those

Gruesome cut cheeks.

Yeah I know.

But don’t let me frighten you.

I mean no harm.

See these outstretched hands?

See the smile?

When did you last see the likes?



Was it before the night attack

And the terrifying fires

Throughout the village.

Before your mother was strangled

Your brother’s throat slit

Trying to defend.

Protesting Grandpa’s tongue

Cut out? While his feet flailed.



One of the bigger Rebels

Grabbed you by the throat.

Tossed you into his truck.

Smirking as he did so.

Put a heavy rifle

In your hands.

Slapped your face hard.

Gave you a beret to wear.

All eight or nine years of you.

I’ll bet.


In just that fashion

You were made a killer.

And soon a hater.

And a slave.

A slop carrier.

But not any more.



So get in my truck…

Why do you hesitate

I want you to come

To a place of peace.

The orphanage, the playground.

Steady meals.



A whimpering sound?

Concealed. Further over.

Oh, you have a sister.

Come on, you too dear.

Lots of room.

Don’t forget your sandals.

About this poem

Got this idea after viewing the film Machine Gun Preacher starring Gerard Butler.

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Written on May 29, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 29, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X B C X X X D E X F X X X X X X X X X B G X H D X F X C E A I I X I X H X X X J J I I X X G
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,197
Words 304
Stanzas 47
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and moving poem! Your use of vivid imagery and emotive language really transported me to the heart of this story, and I couldn't help but feel incredibly touched by the narrator's compassion and kindness towards these two young victims of violence.

    Your message about the potential for redemption and the power of love to heal even the deepest wounds is truly inspiring, and it left me feeling both hopeful and humbled.

    If I could offer one suggestion for improvement, it would be to perhaps explore the characters and their backstories in a bit more detail in order to give the reader an even deeper understanding of their experiences and emotions. However, this is a minor point and does not detract from the overall impact of your poem.

    Thank you for sharing this incredible piece of writing with us! I look forward to reading more of your work.
     
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