Analysis of The Sun's Protection For The Moon



Always have, Always will the sun will provide all the protection it has to the moon.
To keep us from getting to HER,using it's hot blow that penetrates through the skin and even kill.
HER safety is everything to HIM,but she keeps running away from HIM.

At night she appears accompanied by stars she brightens the earth without harming us.
Outside we gaze at HER admiring HER beauty
He will be hiding behind the mountains waiting to attack.

They have not met as if they miss the bus.
Always far apart from each other,then mankind call it day when the sun is up in the sky waiting for the moon,but she never comes.Did SHE miss the bus?

I wish one day the sun gets to see HIS love,the MOON and star's and the universe will celebrate the moment.
People do too celebrate after being apart for a long time,smiling their feelings gets mixed in a lovely way.

The sun will find the MOON,NOTHING LASTS FOREVER. -Thomas


Scheme XXX AXX AA XX A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011011001011101 111110111111101010101 0101101111100111 111010100111100101101 111110010010 111100101010101 1111111101 110111111111101110011010111011101 111101111111010010110010 10111010100110111101100101 011101101010
Characters 913
Words 188
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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A poem written by a 17 yearold boy To a girl he love as she is sick He tells in the poem that even distance wont keep them apart NOTHING LASTS FOREVER

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Written on April 21, 2023

Submitted by tshegofatsoomphile24 on April 21, 2023

Modified by tshegofatsoomphile24 on April 21, 2023

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