Analysis of Firefighter’s Request



Who calls to me in this hour so late?
A fallen brother touched by an unkind fate?
I will not falter when called to the fight
Destiny does not take notice of day nor night

The fire rages against the innocent
Every action against it is a moment well spent
Advancing a line through smoke and heat
Fighting in conditions that shall not defeat
A tumultuous path to the heart of the beast
I seek to end destruction from the fire’s feast

Water and steam to battle its fury
Never a moment to fret nor worry
This is my calling and I shall abide
I have an equally strong fire inside
This beast will not win for it has no soul
Ending its life is my only goal

Will you thank me if I perish in this fiery pit?
Will you praise my name for I did not quit?
I fought on for those trapped inside
Please honor my family now that I have died
The fight was enough and proved my worth
It was my time to depart this earth
I promised not to desert you when your need was great
I knew that one day this could be my fate

It is enough if you could say a prayer for me
Praise the warrior who has been set free
Please honor my memory by living your life
Take into your arms my children and wife
I look on you now from the heavens above
Through the clouds and the sky I send my love


Scheme AABB XXCCDD EEFFGG HHFFIIAA EEJJKK
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011011 01010111011 1111011101 100111101111 01010010100 10010011101011 010011101 10001011101 01001101101 111101010101 1001110110 1001011110 1111001101 11110011001 1111111111 101111101 11111110011001 1111111111 11111101 110110011111 011010111 111110111 1101110111111 1111111111 110111110111 1010011111 110110011011 1011111001 11111101001 1010011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,284
Words 268
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 6, 8, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 198
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

This is a poem about the mindset and spirit of a firefighter. The dangers of the profession are accepted and even embraced owing to a commitment of placing the needs of others first, particularly in times of peril.

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Written on October 20, 2022

Submitted by medicteach on March 23, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

1:20 min read
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Chad Brocato

I have been a writer for many years with my published work appearing solely in medical publications. Poetry is a new found passion for me. I am married with a large family, and I serve as a fire chief for a career fire department in South Florida. more…

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