Analysis of My lovely Ms. Tulip

Myrabel Bermoy 2002 (Bulacan)



I basked in the sunshine 
Left you in June
When your bud tried to bloom 
But I disappear like gloom 

"BRB" you told me 
But after the spring, I left thee hengen 
In the midst of what I called Compassionate Love...
Love. Love. Love.

But spring passed by, 
And I let you down, you told me you need me ASAP
But I hide— then you said bye 
I thought it was a better way, but "were done." 

Can I call myself toxic? 
Just as others said, I am a walking chaotic 
that our love turns into sour bye
(sighed)

Morning sun, our Love fell down,
Just your water'd eyes— your heart shattered in the ground
Lovely Tulip!  Please smile. 
Bloom in April please.... don't die!

Lovely Tulip, smile like the sun
But I overdone. And now your Gone.
It keeps us in our safe place
Choosing your inner peace

My lovely Ms. Tulip 
Looking for you from afar...


Scheme AXBB CADD ECEF GGEX XXXE FXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 1101 111111 110111 1111 110011111 001111101001 111 1111 011111111111111 1111111 11110101101 111110 1110111010010 1101101101 1 10110111 111011110001 101011 1010111 10101101 111010111 11101011 101101 110110 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 853
Words 174
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

My lovely Ms. Tulip is all about compassionate love and one sided love. The speaker made a mistake and ghost Ms. Tulip but at the end when she realize everything Ms. Tulip already move on. All she can do is love Ms. Tulip from afar.

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Written on March 28, 2023

Submitted by myrabel_b on March 28, 2023

Modified on April 25, 2023

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