Analysis of The Road Down



Tomorrow left abandoned
with every choice I make
Constricting all potential joy
and limiting my fate
Each short term indecision
restricting unrestrained
My future playing out of tune
a timed and dull refrain
Most often I have missed it
when no outweighs a yes
For temporal gain my judgment strained
—an orphan in regress

(Dreamsleep: February, 2023)


Scheme XXXXXAXXXBAB X
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 1100111 01010101 010011 1110010 01001 11010111 010101 1101111 11101 110011101 110010 1100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 354
Words 59
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 19, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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