Analysis of Missing you was my sin
Nadarine Ghiloufi 2002 (Gabes)
Missing u was my sin...
Hey it's me again trapped in my sins
Left behind crushed by your thunders as I have always been
My beloved trustful sun takes the road leading me up to your sky
blue, wide and warm, Far, far away trembling from my fears of u gone
here's my third storm..
I wasn't that child anymore,
the one mama's left behind her door
In a burning fire out of the hell
to the middle of a monster's house hall
In that scary night I mentioned before When wasn't any light to enlighten the same hall
Would've had u as my sun
my precious light to turn the monsters to angels but angels with gun
That gun with both of your hands on Hiding the ugly truth behind the pressure u made up to kill my will
To burn my skill
Making me ill
Taking all that u can steal
Leaving me behind your door With zero reason or proves making u mine again Lead me to believe, your guts been always full
for not making me your fool
Have u ever heard of a girl in a road
on a back of a horse with many swords u taught her to hold
Have u even seen the red flags u invented in her to made up her sins
to accuse her with your flaws, reflecting the hybrid u been
Now u got what you desired,
do u want from this girl a little bit more to make her tired
All she did is asking your hand to help her stand
But instead u made up your mind closed your heart used your head to get yourself a place u know in it u'll be always admired
Why would people be this awful when they tend to fight u for what they wanted u to be and get mad for being as they required
Backfired of what u committed
eating me up till u lose,
till u lose what u always knitted...
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Metre | 101111 111011011 1011111011111 101111011011111 11011101100111111 1111 1101101 011010101 0010101101 101010111 01101110011101011010011 1011111 11011101011011011 11111111100101010101111111 1111 1011 1011111 101011111010111011011110111111 1110111 11101101001 101101110111011 1110101110100011101 101011101001011 11111010 1111110101111010 111110111101 101111111111111101011101111010 111011101111111111011101111011010 10111010 1011111 11111110 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,652 |
Words | 354 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 27, 1, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 41 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 315 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 84 |
About this poem
Sometimes u find yourself in front of ugly truths of people u thought they were the ones who meant to protect u... Instead they are the monsters pretending to be ur angels..
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