Analysis of On My Shield
On My Shield..
Once The Thought was In my head,
That my life will one day come to its end.
Everything with my thinking rearranged,
Something Deep & Profound changed.
I thought about my kids & Wife
Other things I had not done right.
There was fear, anger, loss & grief,
Then it surprised me cuz in came relief,
In Gods & deties I have no belief.
All That Suffering and pain I had to endure,
What did it get me. What was it all for.
Like lighting it hit me,The feeling of pure exhaustion & I was so very tired.
And I could accept the thought of my moment to expire.
All The people I lost to Death, Illness , Overdose,
I'm ready to be with them again & hold them close.
I've suffered so much more then most & to me this life has not been a gracious host.
Tired of failing & trying to be my Best,
Fighting Battle after Battle I only want rest.
Even The Strongest Warriors lay down there Sword
I can be released from these Vows I swore,
I can't explain How This I came to feel.
To just close my eyes & be carried off this battfield on my shield.
For me it's been a War That cut me straight & Deep like a Knife,
Yet it's not A war this was my life.
I have Accepted this & the role I played,
When My time comes to rest,
I will not be Afraid...
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Metre | 111 1011011 1111111111 10111001 101011 1101111 10111111 1111011 1101110101 01111101 111000111101 1111111111 11011110110101111010 01101011110101 101011111010 110111101111 1101111111111110101 10110101111 1010101011011 100101001111 1110111111 1101111111 11111110111111 11110111111101 111011111 1101010111 111111 111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,241 |
Words | 279 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 28 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 934 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 253 |
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Written on October 23, 2022
Submitted by Draven1205 on February 12, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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