Analysis of Our World and Jesus
Our World and Jesus
What's happening to our World
Folks have lost their minds,
This meanness, cruelty and hatefulness
We try to leave behind.
God gave his only son
To relieve us of our sins,
But with all these sins of violence
Will he still let us in?
People better look around
And see what they've become,
Cold, bitter and heartless
Seem like the devil's son.
We all will face our maker
On our judgement day,
I hope he sees inside my heart
And says I'm worthy to stay.
So get your hearts together
Stop worrying what others do,
All this gossip and worrying bout them
You best be worried bout you.
Love one another
That's what we're supposed to do,
Pink, purple or polka-dot
We're all brother's and sister's too.
We only have one maker
And he gives us all his love,
We just have to accept it
So we make it up above.
| Scheme | A XXAX BXXX XXAB CDXD CEXE CEXE CFXF |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 101010 11001101 11111 1101001 111101 111101 10111101 111111100 111110 1010101 011101 110010 110101 11111010 110101 11110111 0111011 1111010 11001101 1110010011 1111011 11010 1110111 1101101 11100101 1101110 0111111 1111011 1111101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 836 |
| Words | 190 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 8 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 29 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 79 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
This is so how I see our World these days there is way to much judgement and condemning and not enough love and understanding.
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Written on August 15, 2022
Submitted by Tonjarina on January 26, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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