Analysis of I Would Make You Mine
In the loneliness of life
In the sadness of heartbeats
In the quietness of the nights
I often remember you
Despite that
I have never seen you
I have never met you
Even if you don't know me
Why still your name stays in my mind;
It becomes a formation
It becomes a question
We both may become an ideal love
In a journey of exhausted breath
You and I would travel together
To become a pretty reality
Perhaps you would hint from somewhere
I would stop waiting for selfish people
By your proximity;
I would perfume my breath
I would make my life sweet
I would make you mine
I promise.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0010011 001011 00100101 1100101 011 111011 111011 1011111 11111011 1010010 101010 111011011 001010101 101110010 10101010 0111111 1111011010 110100 110111 111111 11111 110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 579 |
Words | 114 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 464 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 112 |
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