Analysis of US

Sharon OConnell 1971 (Massachusetts)



The world is in a scare when our freedom is at stake.
Never knowing when the bridge was gonna break.
The very simple pleasure of living life in peace
has been stolen from our hearts right under our feet.

I believe in God in Heaven above
who sent us here with intentions of love.
We always lend our hand and try to keep peace.
Knowing right from wrong is the freedom we keep.

So much heartache, so many tears,
so many loved ones taken from their years.
The sorrow we have and the pain we feel
will never leave our hearts but only make us kneel.

We will pull through and come together strong.
We will not lose our freedom from which we belong.


Scheme AABX CCBX XXDD EE
Poetic Form
Metre 01100111010111 10101011101 0101010110101 11101101110101 1010101001 1111101011 11110101111 10111101011 1111101 1101110111 0101100111 1101101110111 1111010101 1111101011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 648
Words 139
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about 911. This tragedy was life changing and devastating for everyone in the US. We pulled through together, stayed strong and united. This heart-wrenching event challenged the US but proved that "We will not loose our freedom from which we belong."

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Written on September 11, 2000

Submitted by smarieo7 on November 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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