Analysis of The Room
The Room.
She sits in a corner in her forgotten world,
Through the flickering sunlight memories are stirred,
Days as a child not sure how far gone,
Alone with her thoughts to share with no one.
Days by the sea and summers long,
Skipping through the waters singing a child's song,
Her mother calls out for strawberry ice cream,
She runs across golden sand holding onto her dream.
She lays on soft blanket now sweetheart by her side,
The old familiar harbour so calm stretches wide,
Her own children play with sand and ball
Her eyes without life open, to stare at the wall.
In her garden of Eden,time she loved to spend,
The smell of fresh cut grass, to the block shed at the end,
Covered in white trellis sweet pea all in bloom,
Her Prince sits by her side,but reality now is this room.
"Oh holy night" every Christmas eve,
She would sing from her heart truly believe,
To your choir in heaven Lord, a place truly deserved,
Her soulmate there with you, next seat is reserved.
Celtic music plays in this room filled with like,
A hornpipe, a jig she would dance with delight,
She raises a smile as her feet tap the floor,
Oh to lead out the line of Celtic dancers once more.
So quick so sudden her mind was shut off,
Like the flick of a switch, life in the presence is gone,
But now and then she answers, a loved ones voice,
The switch flicks to off,she has no choice.
On a midsummer evening dusk moving in,
Sun departs the day scented stock fills the air,
A Blackbird sings softly raising her heart
Back in the room ,not song, but silent despair.
Nine years of voided memories and a pennance endured,
Nine years locked in prison no crime ever done,
No judge no jury for this sentence carried,
Not guilty our Lord, to your heaven bring home .
Scheme | A XXBC DDEE FFGG HHAA IIJJ XXKK XBLL XMXM XCXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1 01 110010000101 10100110011 110111111 0110111111 11010101 10101010011 0101111011 1101101101001 11111011101 010101011101 011011101 010111011101 0010111111 0111111011101 10011011101 011101101111 1101100101 1111011001 11100101011001 0111111101 10101011111 01001111101 11001101101 1111011101011 1111001111 1011011001011 11011100111 01111111 10110101100 10101101101 0101101001 10011111001 1111010000101 11101011101 11110111010 110101111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,843 |
Words | 382 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 136 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
About this poem
This poem is dedicated to everyone on this planet that has suffered directly or indirectly from Alzheimer's disease. Dedicated to and written about my mother in law Mary Maher.
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Written on September 04, 2018
Submitted by rory1951961 on November 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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