Analysis of If I loved you more

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



If I loved you more
The angels might stop calling
If I loved you more
Heaven might start falling
If I loved you more
The birds might stop singing
If I loved you more

If I loved you more
The earth might start shaking
If I loved you more
The lord might start crying
If I loved you more
Our hearts might stop trying
If I loved you more

If I loved you more
The sun might stop shining
If I loved you more
Life might start hiding
If I loved you more
The oceans might start drying
If I loved you more

If I loved you more
The stars might stop turning
If I loved you more
The Gods might stop writing
If I loved you more
The clouds might start lightening
If I loved you more

If I loved you more
A touch might stop feeling
If I loved you more
Fate might stop yearning
If I loved you more
Thought might stop swirling
If I loved you more


Scheme AbAbAbA AbAbAbA AbAbAbA AbAbAbA AbAbAbA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (31%)
Metre 11111 0101110 11111 101110 11111 011110 11111 11111 011110 11111 011110 11111 1011110 11111 11111 011110 11111 11110 11111 0101110 11111 11111 011110 11111 011110 11111 0111100 11111 11111 011110 11111 11110 11111 11110 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 828
Words 175
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on November 24, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 24, 2022

Modified by heathert.34240 on November 24, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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