Analysis of Rescue work

Heidi McCarty 1991 (Williamsport, PA)



Rescue work
By Heidi McCarty

So many suffering souls,
Run the streets day and night,
How I wish I could gather them all up,
And squeeze them all so tight.
It’s hard to say no,
It’s hard to turn away,
It’s hard to live this life,
Each and every day.
I spend my days consumed,
With thoughts of suffering cats,
Who wants to live this way?
A feeling I can’t combat.
Am I doing enough?
Am I really making a change?
Why does no one want to help?
I find it really strange.
How can you look in a cats eyes?
That’s begging you for help?
How can you walk away,
As they sit, cry and yelp?
How do you live with yourself?
Knowing that you didn’t do a thing?
You left them lay there suffering,
What comfort did you bring?

I try to work, and care for my family,
I try to have a life outside of this,
But no matter what I do,
It’s rescue work I miss.
I feel like my purpose is not fulfilled,
Unless I’m rescuing or trapping,
I’m not satisfied, unless I hear the trap snapping

The exhilaration I feel,
When i see the trap door tripped,,
The relief  I feel,
When everything’s done and your ear has been clipped.
I don’t know what your future holds ,
Outside of this trap door,
But you’ll never have to worry,
About having babies anymore.

I will continue to advocate,
For those with no voice,
Making sure no more suffer,
Will always be my first choice.

With each head I pet through the trap
With each hand that I have gloved
Know that it’s a sign,
That you are deeply loved.

Some day I hope this will all change,
So you don’t continue to live in fear,
I hope this madness stops,
As I’m all out of tears.

I will forever be your voice ,
I’ll catch you when you fall,
Until my last breath, I’ll be there
I’ll be there for you all.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101 110010 1101001 101101 1111110111 011111 11111 111101 111111 101001 111101 1111001 111111 0101110 111001 11101001 1111111 111101 11110011 110111 111101 111101 1111101 10111101 11111100 110111 11110111100 1111011111 1110111 110111 1111101101 011100110 111001110110 0001011 1110111 00111 1101011111 11111101 111111 11101110 01101001 110101100 11111 1011110 111111 11111101 1111111 11101 111101 11111111 1110101101 111101 111111 11010111 111111 01111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,773
Words 398
Sentences 21
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 24, 7, 8, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

This poem was written about how I feel rescuing cats and doing TNR work

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Written on October 25, 2022

Submitted by heidim.01042 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heidi McCarty

I am a mother of 3, I work full time, and do full time animal rescue work! more…

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