Analysis of Ukrain
The demons came storming
as demons do
with orders to annihilate the yellow and blue
on that day, we lost our names. Came to be called by only one- Ukraine
the demons brought death, death on the ground death from above
they did not come to liberate they came to kill the dove
From a demented tyrant’s throne, a command was sent
Kill and rape and maim the innocent
like some ghastly evil Picasso the demons paint rubble with blood
make chaos where pride and order once stood
munitions make mountains of rubble, there on a rubble hill
a young mother slumps on bloody knees, mute, utterly still
Paralyzed by horror, she cannot feel her torn skin, cannot feel the sun, does not smell the acrid smoke
She clasps her hands between her knees (my eyes go blind to see) and tries
To see the world through her dead child's open eyes
there are scenes once seen that cannot be erased
the child's torn bones, her bloody face
frozen gaze, the mother feels nothing hears nothing, thinks nothing
is nothing
the responders call “come away, danger there, come away…” she will not stir
her daughter’s eyes are looking at her
beyond hope, beyond thought, beyond pain
There she kneels on the rubble in the broken heart of Ukraine
(coda)
What good is God if he gave us free will
To ignore the command “Thou Shalt not kill”
From the day it was given, men across the globe ignore it still
Scheme | ABBC DDXX XXEE XFF XXAAGG CC XEEE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 010110 1101 110101001001 111111011111110101 0101111011101 1111110111101 1001010100111 101010100 11101001001011011 1101101011 010110110110101 01101110111001 101101101011101011110101 1101010111111101 11011011101 11111110101 01110101 101010110110110 110 001011011011011111 010111010 011011011 111101000101101 10 1111111111 1010011111 1011110101010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,411 |
Words | 269 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 3, 6, 2, 4 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 155 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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Written on September 02, 2022
Submitted by steve-edwards on September 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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