Analysis of The Clouds are Absent



Months already
The soil is tilled
Seeds are planted
They await the clouds.
The cattle is up the hill
The sheep is on the farm
They have stopped grazing
They need dehydration
They want digestion
They await the clouds.
Tired of crying and praying
Fowls have become dumb
Dogs are now bony
Dust is tick and fleshy
They hope for some drops
Yet, no where to be found
They await the clouds.
Heads towards heaven
No clouds in the sky
Death is somewhere resting
The torment is everlasting
All hopes are gone
The clouds are absent!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010 0111 1110 10101 0101101 011101 11110 11010 11010 10101 10110010 11011 11110 111010 11111 111111 10101 10110 11001 11110 011010 1111 01110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 528
Words 106
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 96

About this poem

The absence of rain and the havoc it causes to plants and animals

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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by juniorwilliam200 on September 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mai William Bemsii Junior

He's a Cameroonian from the North West region. He's a PhD student in Bilingualism at the University of Dschang and equally a poet. more…

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