Analysis of The Story (Abuse)
DUFF 1999 (Worcester)
1. It's all roses and light
when we met,
sweet something and four-letter word
LOVE.
2. Your hands were warm
and soft at the same time.
Heart beating like a rhythm
your words were your truth
maybe that's why I believed you
when you said you're SORRY.
3. Your hands touched my skin
and left a mark and saw it "as a mistake, a slip of a moment"
Your hands pushed me against the wall
to the floor, and it was my fault.
My face had too much to say
I knew you didn't mean to do that.
4. All the bones in me cracked
and I forgave you while you
were breaking them.
5. Shuttered all the good words surrounded
me, cause your voice was too loud and strong to ignore.
My body become friends with your hands,
my ears were your voice's best friend, while my tears got too tired of falling but they fell anyway.
My voice got stuck, no scream, no voice.
6. Come to think of it, my mistake was not counting how many time you said sorry or how many times you didn't.
I never counted how many times we were happy... I was busy preparing being PERFECT and preventing history from repeating OR maybe I loved the attention, affection and the love language that came after
But now am....
Scheme | XXXX XXXXAX XBXXCX XAX XXXCX BX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111001 111 11001101 1 1101 011011 1101010 11011 10111011 111110 11111 01010111001011010 11110101 10101111 1111111 111101111 101011 0101111 0101 101011010 111111101101 110011111 11011011111111011011110 11111111 1111110111101101111011101110 11010110110101110010100100101001010110110010010001101110 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,171 |
Words | 244 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 6, 6, 3, 5, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 128 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
About this poem
Was inspired by the movie "ENOUGH" starring Mrs Jennifer Lopez Affleck. Was written on the 06 February 2021.
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Written on August 28, 2022
Submitted by theonlygirlathome on August 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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