Analysis of solitude

Muneer Majid 1977 (srinagar)



Lying in my comfort,
I curl and sway !
The pain in my heart,
just won’t go away !
The sweets taste bitter
and mouth gets numb !
Stars; when I reach them,
the sky goes dumb !
Resting by the brook,
makes brook go dry !
and then a random whisper,
boys don’t cry !
Waking from the stupor,
after a long wait !
As I try to move,
I lose my gait !
The night is dark,
It all seems far !
Left there is an,
oozing scar!
Being my own antagonist,
my thoughts go rude !
Welcome my dear,
welcome to my solitude!!!


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHDHDIJIKLMLNOPO
Poetic Form
Metre 100110 1101 01011 11101 01110 0111 11111 0111 10101 1111 0101010 111 101010 10011 11111 1111 0111 1111 1111 101 10110100 1111 1011 101110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 507
Words 119
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 106

About this poem

This poem is about my thoughts that disturb my solitude and make me restless.

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Written on June 06, 2022

Submitted by Muneerbazaz on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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