Analysis of Looking Back



She died in my arms; her breath slowly stopped
My best friend was gone
As she stepped over to the new world beyond
My heart it was numb, my mind it was frozen

Till later, like thunder, the tears they did fall
No warning, no shout out, no nothing at all
They seem to be there whether happy or glad
Unseen by others who don’t know you are sad

For years the pain lasts though it lessens with time
Looking back at the good times some comfort is found
The feelings still strong for the love of another
Forever my heart holds a place for my mother


Scheme XXXX AABB XXCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1101101101 11111 11110101101 11111111110 11011001111 11011111011 11111101011 01110111111 11011111011 101101111011 010111011010 010111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 582
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

The death of my mother at the time was not as earth shattering as I thought it would be in the moment it occurred, however, the effect at a later stage was immense, the sense of loss etc is huge and Im sure everyone feels the same.

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Written on January 10, 2019

Submitted by NoraOMahony on July 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nora Gallagher

Female, works full time in own company, adult children, likes poetry, cinema, reading, travelling. more…

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