Analysis of DEMOCRACY

Onyi Okadike 1972 (Abakiliki)



Government of the people, they say
This by the people, they claim
And for the people, they insist
Tis Democracy

But spectators we are
Onlookers in the battle for our future
Uninvolved participants
Limited to voting charade

Their choices, we get
Shorn of opinions, are we
Lot cast among thieves
Their winners, our options

Self made choice is ultimate, declared the he-goat
An example, his beard
A self choice, so befitting
Complimenting his handsomeness

But the scrotal sack?
Courtesy of a friend’s benevolence
Lo and behold
An oversize, his lot


Scheme AXXB XXXX XBXX XXXA XXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 100101011 1101011 01010101 10100 110011 10001011010 0010100 10011001 11011 1101011 11011 1101010 111110001011 101011 0111010 10011 1011 1001010100 1001 10111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 106
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

It is a widely accepted norm that Democracy is the best form of government. Well, in Nigeria to be specific, our experiences seem to say otherwise.

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Written on July 29, 2022

Submitted by Onyiokadike on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Onyi Okadike

Onyi Okadike is a graduate of History/Political Science (Combined Honours) from the prestigious Obafemi Awolowo University, Ile-Ife. He is a first-time writer with a large catalog of unpublished books. He enjoys Sales and Marketing and has, over the years, built an enviable career in the FMCG sector that cuts across several industries; pan Nigeria and in the West African sub-region. He hails from Imo State, Nigeria, and is married with three children. He can be reached at onyiokadike@gmail.com more…

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