Analysis of My Heart
Hasan Johnson 1980 (Peoria Illinois)
My heart is broken
My shame has broken me
Failed love is melancholy's recipe
Where can I find love
Who will hold me
God is invisible
I want someone to touch me
Some people want to be alone but I don't
Where is she
My lover unconditional
I prayed for healing but it never came
I prayed for love and found shame
Dear Lord please fix me and make me worthy of love I need a miracle
I need help from above
My heart is broken my spirit is low
Sin has become a friend to help me cope
First a drink then a smoke then the games began
All because my heart was broken
Works a bore and life is no fun
What am I to do
| Scheme | ABBCBDBEBDFFDCGHIAAJ |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (25%) Etheree (25%) |
| Metre | 11110 111101 1111100 11111 1111 110100 111111 11011101111 111 1100100 1111011101 1111011 111110111011110100 111101 1111011011 1101011111 10110110101 10111110 10101111 11111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 605 |
| Words | 129 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 20 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 475 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 128 |
About this poem
I'm trying to move on
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Written on June 29, 2022
Submitted by HasanM.Johnson on June 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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