Analysis of The Broken Ring

Eugene Field 1850 (St. Louis) – 1895 (Chicago)



To the willows of the brookside
The mill wheel sings to-day--
Sings and weeps,
As the brooklet creeps
Wondering on its way;
And here is the ring _she_ gave me
With love's sweet promise then--
It hath burst apart
Like the trusting heart
That may never be soothed again!

Oh, I would be a minstrel
To wander far and wide,
Weaving in song the merciless wrong
Done by a perjured bride!
Or I would be a soldier,
To seek in the bloody fray
What gifts of fate can compensate
For the pangs I suffer to-day!

Yet may this aching bosom,
By bitter sorrow crushed,
Be still and cold
In the churchyard mould
Ere _thy_ sweet voice be hushed;
So sing, sing on forever,
O wheel of the brookside mill,
For you mind me again
Of the old time when
I felt love's gracious thrill.


Scheme ABCCBXDEED XAXAFBXB XGHHGFIDDI
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 011111 101 1011 100111 01101111 111101 11101 10101 11101101 1111010 110101 100101001 110101 1111010 1100101 1111110 10111011 1111010 110101 1101 0011 111111 1111010 111011 111101 10111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 737
Words 146
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 10
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 197
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eugene Field

Eugene Field, Sr. was an American writer, best known for his children's poetry and humorous essays. more…

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