Analysis of Carmel Valley
Brooks Smith 1981 (AL)
Calm Sunday staring across the room.
Eye contact caused such an aroused swoon.
Black joggers exposed all of her curves.
Essential oils provoked such a verve.
Nippled gazing like secret search lights.
Right through her shirt ready to take flight.
Thick beautiful Greek column thighs
I wanted the treasure she held tight inside.
Wet kisses I traced her lips with mine.
Brown eyes I was looking for a sign.
To strip her naked shirts then the rest.
And taste her nectar I knew it would be the best.
Top lips then bottom moans but wants to shout
Top lips then bottom soft fingers In and out.
Top lips then bottom give yourself to me.
Top lips then bottom cum and you'll be free.
Like smooth jazz In a New York alley
I danced blissfully in her carmel valley.
Then danced away thinking of her hips.
And scent of her valley still on my lips....
Scheme | XXXX XXXX AABB CCDD DDEE |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) Etheree (25%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11100101 11111011 110011101 010101101 11011011 110110111 11001101 11001011101 110110111 111110101 110101101 010101111101 1111011111 11110110001 1111010111 1111010111 111001110 11100000110 110110101 0110101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 846 |
Words | 176 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 132 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
About this poem
Poem simply about erotica. Wild thoughts you wish existed.
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Written on June 04, 2022
Submitted by Brooxfullofjazz on June 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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