Analysis of Frostbite



On a dreary weekend morning
I got into the car
We picked up my friend Eli
Since Greenlake was quite far

The tension was a building
Morale falling like the rain
Dad’s silence indicated
That this early was a pain

And too soon the race appeared
Wind starting to arise
Warm-up to the starting line,
But alas our slow demise
A fishing rod was tied to an oar
Still new with plastic wrap
We gave it to the officials for
5 minutes until our racing lap

Our race was quite short,
And demolished them we did,
But I stopped the boat,
When we were but three quarters in

Once the other boat went by,
We picked it up quite fast
And won the race by .33 (seconds)
Our race was quite a blast!!


Scheme ABCB ADXD XEXEFGFG XXXX CHXH
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110 110101 1111110 11111 0101010 0110101 110100 1110101 0110101 110101 1110101 10110101 010111111 111101 111100101 100110101 101111 0010111 11101 11011100 1010111 111111 0101110 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 686
Words 144
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 8, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on April 21, 2022

Submitted by hmguchi on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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