Analysis of The moon



once upon a summer moon

I was looking at that glowing rock

Then I was asked to return inside

But I was not going to do that

My mom looked outside

But I was really gone

Trying to escape

But having noware to run

I didn’t want to go to bed

So I knew I must escape

I hide behind the bushes

And hoped that I could fake

But then my mom looked

Right at the fern

I stood still

Yet I knew it was over

Mom walked right at me

Walking as she stared

And I was already there.


Scheme X X A X A X B X X B X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 111011101 111110101 111110111 11111 111101 10101 110111 1111111 1111101 1101010 011111 11111 1101 111 1111110 11111 10111 0110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 538
Words 150
Sentences 2
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5

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Written on April 26, 2022

Submitted on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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